I don't really know what inspired this one... But let me know what you think.
It’s a monster
Bottled up
Bottled up inside
One little shake
The pressure is rising
Threatening to explode
Little by little
It is overflowing
Overflowing and hurting
Hurting those I love
I want to tell them
It’s not me
It’s the monster
The monster inside
One more shake
The pressures too much
It’s exploded
I look at the damage
Broken hearts
Worth loving
Broken hands
Worth holding
Broken feet
Worth kissing
All damaged
All because of
This monster.
-7/31/07-
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Tuesday, October 23, 2007
Can you sing WOW?!
Just recentally I found some of the best songs/lyrics I believe to be writting. They ring true for all teens. So, here's to Jordan Pruitt. I really wish I could write like this...
Teenager Jordan Pruitt lyrics-
I like staying up all night
I think it's my right
To sleep until noon
I love watching scary movies.
I could stay shopping all day
Getting my way,
And trying on shoes.
Don't tell me what I should be doing
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I like putting things off till later
Just hanging out, having fun, and taking my time.
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I'm automatically attracted to danger
I can't help myself
Can't be no one else I'm just a teenager
I dread making my bed
I wish I could get out of cleaning my room
Cause I hate keeping my friends waiting
Fast cars, playing about hard
Google-ing stars and surfing for tunes
Does any one here get what I'm saying?
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I like putting things off till later
Just hanging out, having fun, and taking my time.
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I'm automatically attracted to danger
I can't help myself
Can't be no one else
I'm just a teenager
(Spoken)
Hello, this is Jordan
-Hey what's up?
You'll never guess who called me yesterday
-Who?
You know that guy that's taking me to homecoming?
-Yeah
He was like you took my breath away when I saw you
-Haha
He called me sweetie too
-Awe
I don't know if I like him though
I want more minutes on my cell phone
I wanna credit card of my own
I want the keys to the Mercedes-Benz
Yeah
I wanna wear what I wanna wear
I wanna copy what I think is fair
I wanna chill at the mall with my friends
(At the mall with my friends)
Does anyone here get what I'm saying?
Just hanging out havin' fun and taking my time
I can't help myself
Can't be no one else
I'm just a teenager
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I like putting things off till later
Just hanging out, having fun, and taking my time.
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I'm automatically attracted to danger
I can't help myself
Can't be no one else
I'm just a teenager
Outside Looking In Jordan Pruitt lyrics-
You don't know my name
you don't know anything about me
I try to play nice
I want to be in your game
The things that you say
You may think I never hear about them
But word travels fast
I'm telling you to your face
I'm standing here behind your back
[Chorus:]
You don't know how it feels
To be outside the crowd
You don't know what it's like
To be left out
And you don't know how it feels
To be your own best friend on the outside looking in
If you could read my mind
You might see more of me that meets the eye
And you've been all wrong
Not who you think I am
You've never given me a chance
[Chorus:]
You don't know how it feels
To be outside the crowd
You don't know what it's like
To be left out
And you don't know how it feels
To be your own best friend on the outside looking in
Well, I'm tired of staying at home
I'm bored and all alone
I'm sick of wasting all my time
[Chorus (x2):]
You don't know how it feels
To be outside the crowd
You don't know what it's like
To be left out
And you don't know how it feels
To be your own best friend on the outside looking in
You don't know how it feels
To be outside the crowd
You don't know what it's like
To be left out
And you don't know how it feels
To be your own best friend on the outside looking in
Aren't they great!? She has some more songs but these are my two favorite.
Teenager Jordan Pruitt lyrics-
I like staying up all night
I think it's my right
To sleep until noon
I love watching scary movies.
I could stay shopping all day
Getting my way,
And trying on shoes.
Don't tell me what I should be doing
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I like putting things off till later
Just hanging out, having fun, and taking my time.
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I'm automatically attracted to danger
I can't help myself
Can't be no one else I'm just a teenager
I dread making my bed
I wish I could get out of cleaning my room
Cause I hate keeping my friends waiting
Fast cars, playing about hard
Google-ing stars and surfing for tunes
Does any one here get what I'm saying?
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I like putting things off till later
Just hanging out, having fun, and taking my time.
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I'm automatically attracted to danger
I can't help myself
Can't be no one else
I'm just a teenager
(Spoken)
Hello, this is Jordan
-Hey what's up?
You'll never guess who called me yesterday
-Who?
You know that guy that's taking me to homecoming?
-Yeah
He was like you took my breath away when I saw you
-Haha
He called me sweetie too
-Awe
I don't know if I like him though
I want more minutes on my cell phone
I wanna credit card of my own
I want the keys to the Mercedes-Benz
Yeah
I wanna wear what I wanna wear
I wanna copy what I think is fair
I wanna chill at the mall with my friends
(At the mall with my friends)
Does anyone here get what I'm saying?
Just hanging out havin' fun and taking my time
I can't help myself
Can't be no one else
I'm just a teenager
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I like putting things off till later
Just hanging out, having fun, and taking my time.
Give me a break I'm just a teenager
I'm automatically attracted to danger
I can't help myself
Can't be no one else
I'm just a teenager
Outside Looking In Jordan Pruitt lyrics-
You don't know my name
you don't know anything about me
I try to play nice
I want to be in your game
The things that you say
You may think I never hear about them
But word travels fast
I'm telling you to your face
I'm standing here behind your back
[Chorus:]
You don't know how it feels
To be outside the crowd
You don't know what it's like
To be left out
And you don't know how it feels
To be your own best friend on the outside looking in
If you could read my mind
You might see more of me that meets the eye
And you've been all wrong
Not who you think I am
You've never given me a chance
[Chorus:]
You don't know how it feels
To be outside the crowd
You don't know what it's like
To be left out
And you don't know how it feels
To be your own best friend on the outside looking in
Well, I'm tired of staying at home
I'm bored and all alone
I'm sick of wasting all my time
[Chorus (x2):]
You don't know how it feels
To be outside the crowd
You don't know what it's like
To be left out
And you don't know how it feels
To be your own best friend on the outside looking in
You don't know how it feels
To be outside the crowd
You don't know what it's like
To be left out
And you don't know how it feels
To be your own best friend on the outside looking in
Aren't they great!? She has some more songs but these are my two favorite.
Children...
Well, this was inspired by a conversation/writing with Anna.
I don't have a title for it also so any ideas would be more than welcomed.
I'm not to sure what I think of it. It's pretty short and could have some additions or it could just be left short.
In the eyes of children
life is an adventure
So many things to explore.
In the hands of children
life is a peice of clay
Ready to mold.
In the ears of children
life is just another
Song to sing.
In the mind of children
life is amazing
Full of wonders.
-9/8/07-
I don't have a title for it also so any ideas would be more than welcomed.
I'm not to sure what I think of it. It's pretty short and could have some additions or it could just be left short.
In the eyes of children
life is an adventure
So many things to explore.
In the hands of children
life is a peice of clay
Ready to mold.
In the ears of children
life is just another
Song to sing.
In the mind of children
life is amazing
Full of wonders.
-9/8/07-
Falling Into the Unknown
This writing was inspired by a dream. I don't really know what the form of writing is, if it's a poem or what. That's how much of an amature I am. :) I haven't decided what the title should be, Falling Into the Unknown? The Net of Safty? If you have any ideas please let me know,
Again all constructive critisim is welcomed...
One foot in front
Stepping out into the spotlight
The tightrope walker takes caution
Her goal, get to the other side
Safely.
I think of that girl in comparison of me.
Needing to be cautious,
One foot in front of the other.
Careful not to step off the line.
Wanting to awe the crowd below.
She’s walking, almost to the other side
She steps up on to the solid platform.
Pivoting she waves to the crowd,
They cheer, she’s loving their appreciation,
Glad that they care that she’s safe.
She looks back to where she started.
I look back to where I started
Realizing I’ve came along way.
Proud of some things
Hateful of others.
But glad I made it here.
She looks out thinking,
She’ll make this pass exciting
Walking forwards she stops in the middle
She quickly pirouette, turning in a circle.
She’s dizzy and confused for a second
But she lands and is relieved to be facing the right direction.
I’m sometimes like that,
Going round and round in circles
Not sure where to stop.
Afraid of stopping and finding
I’m facing backwards.
Then I’d have the choice,
Go back to where I came from
Or
Take a chance and move on.
She takes the chance,
Walking forwards,
Her destination,
The strong and sturdy platform.
There are scattered sighs of joy
That she’s reached the end.
Now one more pass she figures.
She starts off walking backwards.
Sometimes I’m walking backwards,
Making the wrong decision,
Making a bad choice.
Taking a chance.
But I have to keep moving.
She reaches the middle and stops.
She gracefully does a flip and she starts falling
Falling.
When I stumble I end up falling into
the Unknown.
I’m hoping and praying someone will
Catch me and set me straight
Again.
She falls into a net all spread out
To stop her fall.
She’s saved by people
Who love her,
And I am too.
-8/21/07-
Again all constructive critisim is welcomed...
One foot in front
Stepping out into the spotlight
The tightrope walker takes caution
Her goal, get to the other side
Safely.
I think of that girl in comparison of me.
Needing to be cautious,
One foot in front of the other.
Careful not to step off the line.
Wanting to awe the crowd below.
She’s walking, almost to the other side
She steps up on to the solid platform.
Pivoting she waves to the crowd,
They cheer, she’s loving their appreciation,
Glad that they care that she’s safe.
She looks back to where she started.
I look back to where I started
Realizing I’ve came along way.
Proud of some things
Hateful of others.
But glad I made it here.
She looks out thinking,
She’ll make this pass exciting
Walking forwards she stops in the middle
She quickly pirouette, turning in a circle.
She’s dizzy and confused for a second
But she lands and is relieved to be facing the right direction.
I’m sometimes like that,
Going round and round in circles
Not sure where to stop.
Afraid of stopping and finding
I’m facing backwards.
Then I’d have the choice,
Go back to where I came from
Or
Take a chance and move on.
She takes the chance,
Walking forwards,
Her destination,
The strong and sturdy platform.
There are scattered sighs of joy
That she’s reached the end.
Now one more pass she figures.
She starts off walking backwards.
Sometimes I’m walking backwards,
Making the wrong decision,
Making a bad choice.
Taking a chance.
But I have to keep moving.
She reaches the middle and stops.
She gracefully does a flip and she starts falling
Falling.
When I stumble I end up falling into
the Unknown.
I’m hoping and praying someone will
Catch me and set me straight
Again.
She falls into a net all spread out
To stop her fall.
She’s saved by people
Who love her,
And I am too.
-8/21/07-
Monday, October 22, 2007
The Start of Just.Another.Thing
I've always been a major reader. A MAJOR reader. I love all forms of literature. I praise and worship those capable of creating wonderful work that others can enjoy. And one of my many goals is to get a book/article/poem/something published. I would love that. I do believe however that I'm not a great writer, or one that deserves publishing. I know, I know, I am young and an undeveloped writer but still. So anyway the point of this blog is to get my writings out there, for the very few if any, I let read.
So those of you, I have three things I request,
1- Please all constructive criticism is completely and utterly welcome!
2- None of the things I have written about is directed at anyone or anything. So please don't take offense.
3- I hope you do enjoy reading my writings.
Thanks,
Chloe n Writin (supposed to be Chloe in writing...) Hehe right?
So those of you, I have three things I request,
1- Please all constructive criticism is completely and utterly welcome!
2- None of the things I have written about is directed at anyone or anything. So please don't take offense.
3- I hope you do enjoy reading my writings.
Thanks,
Chloe n Writin (supposed to be Chloe in writing...) Hehe right?
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