Imperfection
A glass with a chip
Coloring outside the lines
A scar on a face
A note sung off key
A treat baked too long
A mistake
A story
Is it imperfection?
12.26.07
Mr. Hanson's advice. I like it. Thanks!
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I like the powerful punch of the lines in this poem... The images bring the feelings into focus. I am wondering why you broke the pattern in the second line, but rather like it there...
Great ending in the question
Nice.
Mom
Interesting to know.
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