She’s trying
She’s living
She’s learning
Trying to clear up
Big question mark
Unsure of the future
Who her friends are
Her needs
Dreams
She’s living her life
As best as she can
Living laughing loving
But also
Hurting crying hating
She’s learning the way
To survive
Love
Learning to care
Listen
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1 comment:
Hi Chloe,
Sorry for my long absence on this; thanks for checking in with me! So, this is a poem I really like because it captures the movement and change that is everyone's life... You incorporated a pattern that makes it hang together. I think you could experiment with the use of metaphor or images (mind pictures) with this poem because you know what you want to say.
Thanks for sharing this...
Mom
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