My thoughts are scattered
I’m reaching, grabbing
Missing
Unable to grasp
Can’t respond
Don’t know how
Thoughts are a mess
Contradicting
Too much to say
No guts
Want to, but can’t
So I’m writing
Writing these words
My thoughts
Would this be better? I changed it to 1st person.
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I'm not sure how I feel about this one. I like the images I see when I read it. It does seem to be a little unstructured though. I don't know what I would do to improve it.
Keep writing. You write far more good things than not-so-good-things.
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