There’s a girl
Full of hope and belief
Believing no one would
Hurt her
Betray her
Hate her
Hoping someone will
Befriend her
Hold her
Love her
Found a friend
Open arms
But with power
Making her weak
Met a friend
Timid and shy
Only she understands
Being so weak
Letting someone else control
Not a friend
Just a somebody
Understanding
Opened arms
She steps in
Grateful for the warmth.
12.26.07
I kind of like this one. Any comments? Advice?
Tuesday, January 8, 2008
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1 comment:
I think this is one that is in line with your style of writing that you are very good at. You have a good way of saying a lot with only a few words.
Keep up the good work.
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