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Tuesday, January 8, 2008

A Girl

There’s a girl
Full of hope and belief
Believing no one would
Hurt her
Betray her
Hate her

Hoping someone will
Befriend her
Hold her
Love her

Found a friend
Open arms
But with power
Making her weak

Met a friend
Timid and shy
Only she understands

Being so weak
Letting someone else control
Not a friend
Just a somebody

Understanding
Opened arms
She steps in
Grateful for the warmth.

12.26.07

I kind of like this one. Any comments? Advice?

1 comment:

MHanson said...

I think this is one that is in line with your style of writing that you are very good at. You have a good way of saying a lot with only a few words.

Keep up the good work.