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Monday, July 14, 2008

Fantasy

little girl
fantasy game
future told
love foreseen


little girl
now a princess
loves her pony
saved by a prince


little girl
dream big
kiss frogs
be the fairest fo them all


6.22.08

1 comment:

jane said...

It's great to see some new writing, Chloe! This is an interesting poem. I especially like the last stanza (watch the typo in the last line--I was trying to decide whether it was "to" or "of" instead of "fo")--a twist on the fairy tale? Perhaps you could think of other ways you would step beyond the traditional fairy tales? And use details, details, details!